I think that Phillip is a kind young man but has judged me on my skin tone. I think he is a very nice young man and will grow up to be a very good man. I can tell that he is not quite sure about his blind situation. I think later on when he gets used to the blindness he will be perfectly fine being blind.
I feel very bad for Phillip because he was taken away from his father and mother and became blind.He has also been hit badly on the head with a concussion and in return has become blind. I also feel that he is homesick and misses his parents and friends. After a while he finally spoke to me and was very curious about me and my past life.
-Timothy
Be sure to read all directions carefully - you were supposed to tell about the actual shipwreck from his point of view. Nicely written, but make sure you have the main objective covered.
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